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Thursday, May 28, 2009
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ReplyDeleteAre we supposed to leave a comment on every new post?
ReplyDeleteCould anyone else not find where to leave comments on either Brittany's or Nick's blogs or am I just blind? lol.
ReplyDeleteDanielle Otos
I can't see the link to comment on their blogs either.
ReplyDeletesame here. i clicked in lots of places and am defeated.
ReplyDeleteI thought we were supposed to leave our comments on this posting versus everyone's individual blogs?
ReplyDeleteALEX – I liked the composition of your photograph. I think this is a good idea. The things you find on people’s coffee tables are often indicative of their personalities. It’s interesting.
CAITLIN – These are some great pictures. I’m glad you stayed with this idea.
CHRISTINE – I think this is such a neat idea. I really like it and I am looking forward to seeing more of your images.
CRYSTAL – These are some good photos. I like your concept of the blur and your feelings toward it.
DANIELLE – Looking forward to seeing your work. I like the idea a lot.
ELAINE – These are some great images. I really like the one with the mirror against the fence. You have a good eye.
GINA – Looking forward to seeing your work
IAN – Interesting concept. It should add up to some pretty unique work.
JOSH – Looking forward to seeing some of the photos.
JULEAH – I think your idea is interesting. The patterns on the clothing are really eye catching and the images are nice.
KYLA – I like the different locations that you are looking at. I’m excited to see the dress once you are able to make it.
LINDSEY – It’s neat seeing how different locations look at day and night. You’re doing a good job.
MELISSA – I’m looking forward to seeing your images.
NICK – It looks like you are having fun exploring different texts. Keep it up.
SARAH – I really love your work. You’re doing a great job. I especially liked the image of the two chairs.
SKY – I love the graffiti bridge and have often thought of doing a series of images with it. I’m looking forward to seeing how yours turns out.
SOUNG – These are some really interesting images. I liked the one at the top the best (with the red door). It seems to be the strongest, to me, and convey what you are really looking at doing.
Yeah, I can't seem to find Brittney's or Nick's either....
ReplyDelete!Message from Nick! I noticed that several of you had trouble trying to post comments on my Artists Book blog. What I had done wrong was post my pictures using the Picture Gadget. I took those down and posted those photos as regular blogs instead. This way it lets people post comments onto my Artists Book blog for each one of the photos....
ReplyDeleteI can't find Brittany's comment link either, but Nick's is now under his photos.
ReplyDelete-Sarah Whitfield
ALEX - i really like your concept and think its neat how you plan to make a coffee table book with the pics
ReplyDeleteBRITTANY- your idea and pics are great. i like that your using truisms. i think if you use different backgrounds it will make ur photos stand out more indivdually.
CAITLIN - nice photos, they have a nostalgic feel that goes with your title. i also like that they are in black and white
CHRISTINE- great concept, i love the stories and think that combined with ur pics youll have a great book!
CRYSTAL - lovely photos! i like that your taking pics of not only urself but things that u like as well.
DANIELLE- good idea, i like the fact that u are going to print ur book like an arthistory book
ELAINE - nice concept, youll be able to get some stunning pics for yor book with this idea.
GINA - good idea,
IAN -wow! your images look great, the colors and compositions are awesome!keep going
JOSH - i really like your idea and think it will make a great book
JULEAH -your colors are really vibrant and i think the closeup pics of your hands sewing the dress are really nice!
KYLA -the locations are great! love the compositions
MELISSA -ur idea will make for a great book, i love that your using props
NICK-i like the direction ur going. your new photo is really successfull with ur use of text!
SARAH-your pics are great! i like that your using people in your photos, keep it up!
SKY-i love that your pics are so vibrant in color. i think ur images should make a great book.
SOUNG -i really like that u are using lighting in your pics to give a certain feeling and also i like that you cant see a whole image of any of the figures in your pics.
-Lindseyfosson
Hey!
ReplyDeleteSo we post our crits for everyone's book blogs here? Lol I'll do both just in case!
-Melissa :)
Alex-love the dirtiness of the table, great start
ReplyDeleteBrittany-love the truthfulness of the photos
Caitlin-like that you changed them to all back & white, good choice
Christine-such a cool idea, interested to see more pics
Crystal-good concept, excited to see the development of your pictures
Danielle-love the historic side of your book, very cool
Elaine-very, very cool. kinda eerie, which I dig
Ian-liking it alot, dig the colors and the simplicity. so cool.
Josh-excited to see your work
Juleah-beautiful dresses, love the close up shots
Kyla-good sketch pic, excited to see where this is going
Lindsey-this is an awesome idea, your pics are great
Melissa-this is going to be cute, like the surreal concept
Nick-really liking the second pic, keep up your exploration of words
Sarah-love the pics with the people, very homey feeling
Sky-love the graffiti bridge, cant wait to see more pics
Soung-very creepy...like the spooky idea
Gina Lukasik
I remember Val saying to post each individual critique on this main page and thats' what I am going to do !
ReplyDeleteALEX- Love this idea. Can't wait to see the different images.
BRITTANY- Your photos are very true and real and I like that. Keeps me interested and ready to see more comments from the different people.
CAITLIN- Beautiful Photos. Very strong photographer.
CHRISTINE- Very Original concpet and different but I realy Like it so far.
DANIELLE- Can't wait to see the images and models you choose.
ELAINE- Awesome idea, you got a lot of work on your hands but I think the rest will come out great.
GINA- Very Visually Pleasing.
IAN- One of the most original Ideas I have seen or heard and it makes me excited!
JOSH- You are going to be pretty busy but I can't wait to see what you got.
JULEAH- Nice Images and camera angles.
KYLA- Locations are everything for your concept and so far I like what I see.
LINDSEY- Never really thought about how different the places could be from day to night but can't wait to see all the locations you choose.
MELISSA- Waiting to see you awesome photos.
NICK- Curious to see where this idea will go but the idea is neat.
SARAH- Tastee Freeze is my favorite and you all know I love to eat and enjoy goodies and this one is popping right off the photo at me! Love it!
SKY- Kinda jealous because this concept is interesting I would even enjoy doing this. Nice photos so far.
SOUNG- Hope you have been watching horror flicks and researching because I am excited and nervous at the same time to see what else you come up with.
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ReplyDeleteI think Val said to post critique for 84 this way and the book blogs on each blog? I did it that way.
ReplyDeletekyla
That is what I understood from last class too.
ReplyDelete!FOM VAL!
ReplyDeleteYes! Post comments of book projects on thier blogs--thank you Nick, for correcting your blog.
Those of you who posted comments of book projects here, please remove them and post them on the appropriate blog. That way everyone will have a chronological collection of feedback. (it will also keep this section from being too busy AND its easier for me to grade)
Post responses to 84 here, when asked to do so.
Please remember to be discriptive about what is working and not working. What you "like" is irrelevent. I love that you guys are so supportive and sweet, just be careful not to do a peer a disservice by not analizing the work more carefully!
Take a look at Sara's comments. She is being discriptive, honest and supportive. This is a good example of the depth of the responses that we are looking for.
(I know this format is strange--but we almost have it. We will be a well oiled machine in 2 weeks!--and forgive the spellings--im on my brothers' archaic machine with no spellcheck! EEK!)
Brittany!!
ReplyDeleteStatement looks great and images are strong!
Please fix your blog so that we can comment there in more detail!
Val
This is for Brittany:
ReplyDeleteThe idea and photos are great! It is amazing how powerful words can be, and I think you have truly created a compelling collection of photos! The one thing I am concerned with is the writing because it looks very similar as if the same person wrote the quote. But besides that it is awesome! Keep up the good work!
- Melissa :)
Sorry for the confusion! I fixed my page so that there is a comment link now.
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